Thursday, November 1, 2007

It Lies

It Lies
Grinning
64 meat cutters
In a jaw fit for death

A word
Unspoken
4 syllables
To end or begin life

A Desire
Burning
2 Bodies
Disappear into One

A Lie
Bitter
3 Words
The 'I' in Love You

4 comments:

  1. Awww...please don't! damn you are making me feel sorry for writing this...

    please chill! :)

    N

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  2. Sweet, makes me think of times gone by, the last line is the absolute Killer, The 'i' ha! who'd have thought of that!

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  3. Oh shit! I actually wrote that here. I am so sorry. :D
    I loved your poem Nothingman. Just that... It was far too intense. It stings in a way too painful... or probably I was too involved in it. But let me tell you I am in love with this poem of yours. :-)

    Cheers!

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