Tie me
In your hair
Throttle me
Right now
Right here
Trap me
You already did
I am hypnotized
Enchanted
A slave to you
Take me
To heaven
Or hell
I will follow
Like a sick puppy
Tell me
When I am bad
How will you punish me
I will
Dream of it
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The idea is inspired by Robert Browning's Prophyria's Lover. Just executed in a different style. Not even dirt compared to the real poem, just my dirt.
2nd last para and one above it are just tooo good
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It is still sweet, tasty Dirt!
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Sounds more like a song to me than a poem. Just my opinion though. Keep it up!!!
ReplyDeleteI like this one a lot.
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