Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Winter

The days have gotten shorter
and the nights colder
this house stinks of loneliness
and wet clothes

the bed is so cold alone
and my heart is frigid ice
this house is not yet a home
and it doesn't feel too nice

I'll dream of water yet again
and in that dream I'll drown
everything seems to bring me down
When you are not around

the winter is ready to pierce my soul
and just like the days I am feeling small
nothing left to do but think of you
and feel warm knowing you're thinking of me too

6 comments:

  1. mmmm... exactly my train of thought...

    stay warm... =)

    Cheers!

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  2. awww sweetie i know you miss me :D
    muah
    dd

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  3. I can feel the cold creeping in.....

    Bring some supernatural element please....

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  4. Shimmer...

    we are on the same train I guess ;)

    DD...
    :) he he he ;)

    Monk E...

    since you said the magic word, stay tuned for the next poem ;) or the one after that :)

    Cheers!!

    N

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  5. you just brought back a whole rush of feelings from like 7 years ago. amazing poem.

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  6. u write so well dude

    I'll dream of water yet again
    and in that dream I'll drown
    everything seems to bring me down
    When you are not around

    this was fabulous.

    take care

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