Drinking rum to drown the pain
Wondering if you are still sane
Silently whispering that name
You do not feel the darkness anymore
For it has seeped into your every pore
The silence is no longer haunting
Filled by your insistent chanting
The rest of the world stops to matter
Even death won't make it better
This rancid itch is here to stay
Itching a bit more than yesterday
You pick the scab to make it bleed
Some more pain is what you need
Who the fuck really needs to heal?
When the pain can make you feel...human again.
-----Now, if that got too sad and depressing, here is the kicker, in the balls----
I think we need more monkeys in these rhymes
People don't like to read pain and anger all the time
Maybe we can start with other animals too
Someone just like me or you.
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nah we dont need monkeys...dark pain makes for good poetry.
ReplyDeleteReminded me of this song - whiskey lullaby
Write about a pig? and a panda? and a dragonfly. :D
ReplyDeleteS.
animals are poor beings man!
ReplyDeletedont make fun of them! :D lol!
write a poem about politicians instead! ;)
-I
for once i thot u were actually gonna be serious =P
ReplyDeleted beginnin reminded me of someone else's writin style tho... nice one =)
cheers!
monkeys or pigs, it's not gonna be worth reading if they're not fucked up...love this stuff man!!!
ReplyDeleteAK...i need the monkeys! Monkeys are coooool!! :D
ReplyDeleteSakshi...this is a poem blog love, not a zoo :) we only wtite monkey poems :P
Imp....dude, animals are not beings:) eeekkk! politicians! nah!
Shimmer...i was serious. he he he naaaah :)
Kris...no crualty to animals man :P
N
whoa! Loved the poem!
ReplyDeleteShe said, “Like crying just to feel your cheeks”.
ReplyDeleteLike the bleeding to feel, right?
Rock on