Thursday, March 12, 2009

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Tie me
In your hair
Throttle me
Right now
Right here

Trap me
You already did
I am hypnotized
Enchanted
A slave to you

Take me
To heaven
Or hell
I will follow
Like a sick puppy

Tell me
When I am bad
How will you punish me
I will
Dream of it

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The idea is inspired by Robert Browning's Prophyria's Lover. Just executed in a different style. Not even dirt compared to the real poem, just my dirt.

4 comments:

  1. 2nd last para and one above it are just tooo good


    keep it up buddy

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  2. It is still sweet, tasty Dirt!
    Rock on!

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  3. Sounds more like a song to me than a poem. Just my opinion though. Keep it up!!!

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